NARRATIVE WRITING
A MAZE RUN
Welcome bloggers, In writing we have been working on a Narrative that happens on our holidays, With a twist we had to EXAGGERATED ! it and hook the reader into the story. We included the characters,setting,problem,climate,solution and ending. I wrote about the movies and my characters were my cousins aunt and uncle and more, My problem was the movie had ended and the door slammed stuck, My sister was outside happy and alone.
I felt that this was the best day of my life because this had actually had happen on my EXAGGERATED holiday.
Here is my story I hope you like it and enjoy!
MUM! “Where's my stockings” as we were at home, it had all started when me and my younger
sister were getting ready for a netball game. Our aunt stomped up our singing we are the world
we are the children, She froze at her spot when she heard her phone, WHERE ARE YOU! As
our aunt screamed , We were lagging with our clothes when we finally finished. We race to the
car and bounced inside. All of a sudden she had an annoying speaker and turned on an 80s
song! We had made it to the place where we were going to watch our cousin play netball, YAY!
As she scored a try for her team. She had finally finished and ran to the car acting like she was
Meghan trainor.
After the amazing netball game we had to go to an Important rugby game.
We hopped in the car, here we go again turning on the speaker and heading to a rugby game
with our uncle and auntie. Slamming the door heading to a rugby game, “WHERE’S MY SEAT!?”
As my sister exaggerated. We could see our cousin tackling the other team trying to win a score,
click click as our auntie was taking photos. OH NO as my aunt had forgotten to text her friends
about the movie she was going to watch, “who cares about the movies” my sister an blurted.
We raced to the car arriving to the movies meeting our aunts and uncles, This can’t be
happening said my auntie as she was almost late for the movies, “Isn’t this a waste of time”
my sister shouted!, we dashed in looking like we needed to go to the toilet. “I thought we were
getting ice cream” screamed my nephew, as we finally got our popcorn and drinks we rushed
up the excavator looking excited when our aunt fainted.
“I knew this was a waste of time” as my sister walked out of the theatre disappointed.
We were all blank as all we saw was people crawling their way out of the theater door.
We were shivering as all of a sudden THE DOOR SLAMMED STUCKED.
My sister was outside like she was the only one free, she was surprised she was alone
and saw us locked inside one of the theatre doors.
“This is why you should trust your mum more than your aunt” I shouted. It was 12:00 and me
and my brother were eating popcorn of the disgusting floor, Our Aunt and uncle were trying to
call for help as my cousins were playing charades.
After an hour everybody was dead asleep except for me and my aunt, she was panicking around the room when I was watching her. She had stopped when everyone was awake by a big smack down coming from the door….
My sister had a our aunts phone, keys and purse, she knew exactly what she was going to do. After a few minutes of my sister spending money she decided to drive a car that belonged to someone, she twisted the key than BROOM BROOM! The engine was ready to rock and my sister was curious.
BANG BANG! A bunch of people crowding us taking all the seats, me and the others acted like nothing happened. As the crowd was coming in we saw someone who had ink all over and a hammer in her hair, she gave the keys to our auntie and was exhausted.
As we walked out my sister said nothing at all, all she said was her time was great. Our aunt looked mysterious looking at which movie we should go watch, first she chose avengers endgame than she changed her mind to toy story 4, after that she chose the secret life of pets than Aladdin. She kept on crawling like a koala and sticking her head in like an ostrich. She couldn’t calm down again we were all staring at her like we were blank.
YES! She chose the movie we wanted to finally watch, The Lion King, It was funny,surprising,happy and realistic.
Savanna wasn’t interested in the movie since it reminded her or her name
SAVANNAH
We were enjoying the movie as we walked out happily
As we walked out we scrambled and said goodbye and remember
Maybe you should trust your aunt more than your mum
ZE END
Good day bloggers and welcome, Well have you ever been in a hip hop class well on Wednesdays our school go to a activate called Hip hop. There is a Hip hop teacher the comes in and shows us different types of Hip hop moves, We practice in the hall and dance to different kind of songs. We have 6 weeks working with the Hip hop teacher, here name is Millie. We play a lot of games that relate to Hip hop like follow the leader while dancing, a warm up which we have to go around the circle and copy eachothers moves, And also we get into groups and make up our own dances with other people. We had a lot of fun dancing and singing and hope we could still do it it. We felt happy and excited to meet our dance teacher and hope we could dance again. I felt like I was at a party and having fun, 
