Narrative writing

Hello my fabulous bloggers, Welcome to my blog. I want to show you my narrative we have been working on last term. I think it was great writing a narrative because we could write about any picture and make up our characters. Here is my narrative, hope you like it.

The friendship and darkness in Antarctica
Chapter 1

The cave

‘Hallelujah’ as the sparkling smooth reindeer, Pascal was pronouncing proudly through the frosty wood’s. He could smell the cold chilly air flying into his nose. Then BASH! Pascal dashed through the forest with fear jumping like a Kangaroo heading back to safety As Pascal wiggled out of the wood’s he found this mysterious dribbled cave in front of him as he stopped. ‘Oh my god’ Pascal said as his heart was bouncing around like a bouncy ball. He galloped inside the cave groven around. Suddenly he found a hole the was old and rusty, He squished through the hole trying to scramble In. Pascal screamed as he was going to faint. He saw big beady eyes the were different colours. Boom! as a wolf came out howling to the reindeer with big enormous fluffy ears and sharp gloaming jaws, twitchy glowing whiskers. The poor Pascal tried to push his huge body out. The wolf chased the reindeer as he was mumbling down through the cave. The wolves came squishing through the hole sticking their slimy tongue out in the whistling wind. One of the wolves name kruze was hiding waiting silently for his lovely dinner, Pascal had belly flopped his way out of the caves. The wolves mouths was wet and silky. Subsequently The wolves captain, Jack was grumbling as he had a sour look on his face, I have been waiting all these years to get that silly sausage all my years, ' Aaahh' The wolves were efficiently terrified at Jack with his big red scar.

Chapter 2

The chase

Phew! As Pascal said as the sun was shimmering out. He lost his way in the dark foggy forest. He screamed for help but absolutely no one came. He was grumpy as he was finding his way out. Oh he said as he found the wolfs, Their teeth where glimmering and their tongue was soggy like a sponge. Pascal leapt over the saggy wolfs, slithering like a snake through the quiet woods. Pascal was huffing and puffing as he scraped the rusty dust. He was still energetic and bouncy. The wolf moaned as he quivered back to his dreadful cave. Pascal sucked the fresh cold water into his watery mouth as the snow was skipping away.

Chapter 3

The big juicy bite

Pascal called his gang of smooth magical reindeer's to come fight the evil wolves. Oh no no no, said the reindeer's as they marched through the woods. It was almost dark and pascal was ready to snuggle in bed with his cosy blanket, looking at the clear bright stars like diamonds. The hungry wolfs came hunting for food to eat, Huh! as the pack of wolves were slogging through the woods. After a few minutes the wolves found a pack of glimmering and gorgeous arctic foxes who were shouting and screaming to the moon. The arctic foxes noticed that a pack of wolves were here, The captain's introduced themselves and their gangs. They wanted to teamed up together being best buddies. Rise

and shine said pascal as he went to the lake, Once he got there he saw the swirling colours and the beautiful reflections. The wolves and arctic foxes groaned as they woke up late. They stretched like a dog and dashed fast like a cheetah. The fluffy wolves and foxes were very hungry and their tails were wagging like a dog. The wolves had decided to eat the reindeer skinny legs,puffy tail,sparkling antlers. Pascal was eating cold freshed plants well the foxes and wolves were spying and being absolutely noisy. BOOM! Someone had taken a big juicy bite of the furry reindeer like he was eating a enormous chewy meat but who bit him? TO BE CONTINUED IMMEDIATELY! ……………..

Chapter 4

The magical reindeer powers

The apoorling Pascal was lying on a floor like a dead skeleton. Wriggly worms and black muttering crows surrounding the reindeer, Yay! As the wolves and arctic foxes swirled their tails and scraped their feet on the crusty snow. Next there was enormous snowballs coming out of the graceful sky. Then came a terrible horrified snow tornado coming out of nowhere hitting the greedy wolfs and foxes. Pascal's group of magical reindeer's were noodling around  till they went towards Pascal. They surrounded Pascal putting the antlers together. There was a glowing light in the freshing sky which made every animal come together. The wolf and foxes were hiding waiting to see what would happen. As soon as they saw the sparkling light Pascal came back to life. The foxes and wolves were cruising tears down getting grumpy and upset, Why didn’t we win as they were slaking. The wolves and foxes jumped like a puma racing to the reindeer's.

Chapter 5

summer

‘Aaaahhh’! said the foxes as the sun was coming out burning there furry skin. Pascal was angry looking at the foxes and others. The foxes and others gobbled away back to the wolves dribbled cave. The reindeer's wanted some peaceful rest for the rest of summer with absolutely no fuss. The wolves finally made it to their cave as well as the foxes, they were paddling like a waka inside the cave. There face were so red It was as red as a balded tomato, the foxes squeezed through the hole a s well as the wolfs. They snuggled in bed having a little nap. The reindeer's woke up the next morning feeling bored and unwell, They gobbled outside (like a turkey) getting some fresh air. The wolves woke up angrily prancing through out of the cave making their way to the foxes. The foxes woke up suddenly they heard something in the woods.

Chapter 6

Winter again!

Yay! As the fuzzy polar bears and the calm penguins came out from their habitats gathering all together for a meeting. Killer whales and walrus came splashing and elephant seals and narwhals came gliding through in the freshwater. Every snow animal gathered in for winter, Greeting each other. Boom! The wolves and foxes had pounced over the crowd and raced to the reindeer's. The reindeer's quietly woke up. Then BOO! The wolves had gathered in surrounding the reindeer's.

Chapter 7

The Battle begins!

The reindeer's stood tall and started to gallop towards the villains snorting loudly. They fighted as the big snowstorm came again spinning like a ballerina. Whoops! As the reindeer  back legs kick the wolfs. I am exhausted the wolves said so they scrambled away in different directions. Jack the wolves captain shivered when the snow storm came. The magical reindeer's scuttled away flying into the air like a eagle, They spread the feathered wings flapping it to the magical frosty tree which was in the middle of the winter woods. Pascal swished to the tree hiding from the foxes The snowstorm got wolves and the foxes where near the storm looking for the reindeer's. Swoosh! As the snow storm grabbed the foxes the foxes were down which only left jack.

Jack was interested when we saw this big enormous tree that lead him to a big snowy calm hall. He was frightened when he saw the reindeer's so he was brave and came trying to fight the reindeer's. But he couldn’t he was to scared so he ran away panicking and promised them he would never come back again. The snow storm had stop well the foxes were very dizzy. They went back home to rest for the rest of their winter. The snow animals were clapping cheering on for the reindeer's giving them a present. The present was a beautiful lovely reindeer that was comfy and snuggled. They appreciate their hard work said the snow animals.

Chapter 8

The Neighbour

The reindeer's were safe in the crusty delighted tree, they wanted to stay here in this fancy tree for years but there was already an owner who owned it. They looked around the lovely house looking at precious objects they’ve never seen. They heard a calm gentle knock on the door, They were too frightened to open it.The owner of the house October the  puffy quiet owl came flying down to landing saying why are you here. They reindeer's had nothing to say but said We want to live in this big trunky house like a mation. The majestic owl said we can both share this winter tree. The reindeer's were happy and packed their stuff selling their tree.

Chapter 9

Happy and sad ending

The friendship had began for the  reindeer's and owl and they lived a happily ever after, except for the foxes and the pack of wolves who had lost their friendship forever.

The End

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