descriptive words

Hi bloggers,in writing term 2 we were writing about a picture.I chose a haunted house and it wasn't that spooky.We had to describe the picture and label it.Next we had to write the words into a sentence.Here is my one.

WALT describe a scene    WALT use descriptive words

HAUNTED HOUSE

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The black spooky house sat in a neighborhood of its street.An grey hard pathway leaded to the
black spooky house.The short herd of the grass was surrounding eachother like a herd of
penguins.There was long dark decorations and a dark thundering sky above the house.A black \
spooky roof was above the spooky house. And An old long pole was near the house sitting an
that old same rusty place.There was a skinny barky tree right next to the spooky house.There
were tall long windows that were made out of glass.The brightness light were flashing and was
bright.there was a wooden door opening and closing well the light were flashing on and of and
also a white dirty fence sitting next to the spooky house.There was a big smokey chimney above \
the roof there were rotten dark leaves falling from the trees and pigeons flying around the roof
and bats flying everywhere and spiders crawling around the floor and also flies buzzing around
my ears.the next door were screaming as loud as a elephant stopping and creepy skeletons
were running around saying happy halloween.there were witches flying with there brooms and
clowns wandering around and werewolves howling at the moon.