persuasive writing

Hi bloggers,its Callum,In writing we did persuasive writing.The writing was about cats vs dogs.We had to give reasons about why they are better here is my writing.

Dogs are better than cats because they are very kind and lovely.Dogs are very helpful because they can sniff and they can guard your house.They have soft and smooth fur.Dogs have
strong healthy teeth.

have wiggly tails.They are cute because they are cuddly and  have powerful barks.Dogs are clever and smart thinkers like a scientist. They are good friends because they can protect you. They are happy to see you when you come home.Dogs are energetic too because they keep you fit and fast.They can keep you safe.Dogs can catch cats out of your yard or garden.Dogs are speedy and fast . They can do jobs for you like police dogs and firefighter dogs.They  are so many types of dogs like German Shepherd, Bulldog, Puppies, Poodle, Stray Dogs and Dalmatians. There are not that much kind of cats.Dogs are intelligent.

 
Dogs are helpful but cats are lazy and just sit there and never listen. dogs are braver than because cats are afraid of water and dogs. Dogs can smell people that were around the house.When the cats do there job it just like to lick their paws and do not care about the job there doing. When the dogs puppies are born they look very cute and fluffy and there skin feels smooth.When the cats kittens are born there just like their mother .The kitten just sits there like their mother. They are lazy like their mother .They do not get the job done.They even  copy what their mothers do.So people who have cats give it away or put it in the bin.Get a dog because they're awesome and smart. I think dogs are better than cats because they always get the job done and there are so many kinds of dogs.Cats are not clever and don't use their brains. Cats are not awesome.
Thank you for reading my writing please comment if you like cats or dogs and anyway how can I Improve my writing.